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雅思小作文形容词描写一个段落实例讲解
发布日期 ：2018.07.23 浏览次数：1917 次
Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
在任何社会中，关爱孩子可能是最重要的工作。因此，所有的母亲和父亲都应该被要求参加一门课程，为他们做好父母的准备。你在多大程度上同意或不同意这种观点？
当我写下我的答案时，我完全不同意所有的父母都应该上父母的课。我会用一个形容词来表达每一个主体段落。下面我将告诉你我的意思。
First main body paragraph:我不同意，因为这个想法是不切实际的。
- Many adults are too busy with work and other commitments
- They may miss sessions, and would they therefore be punished?
- It would be impossible to force prospective parents to attend
- Different parenting styles, impossible to create a course that suits everyone
Second main body paragraph: 我不同意，因为它是不必要的。
- Parents have been raising children without help for thousands of years
- Parents learn from family members, their own upbringing, friends...
- They learn by instinct, trial and error, getting to know their children
- Example: correcting bad behaviour, trying different strategies
完全不同意观点的引言与结论
引言：
It is true that parents shoulder a huge responsibility and that raising children is by no means an easy task. However, I completely disagree with the idea that we should therefore force all mothers and fathers to attend parenting courses.
结论：
The easiest way to write a conclusion is to paraphrase the introduction that you have already written. Start with "In conclusion", and write one sentence that summarises your answer. Can you rewrite my introduction as a one-sentence conclusion?
