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雅思小作文饼状图应该怎么做,饼状图考试的几种形式。
发布日期 :2017.12.09    浏览次数:3569 次

雅思小作文饼状图:饼图没有数字
下面的图表显示了比例的人在加拿大拥有一辆车,两辆车,两辆车以上,或谁没有自己的车。
饼状图
· Just over half of all adults in Canada own one car.

在加拿大超过一半的成年人有一辆车

· Roughly 50% of Canadian adults own one car, while approximately 25% of adults in Canada own two cars.

· 大约有50%的加拿大成年人拥有一辆车,而大约25%的成年人在加拿大拥有两辆车

· Less than a quarter of Canadians do not own a car.

不到四分之一的加拿大人都没有自己的车。

· Only a very small percentage (under 5%) of Canadian adults own more than two cars.

只有一个很小的百分比(5%)的加拿大成年人拥有超过两车。

雅思小作文饼状图:饼图和额外的细节

这是我的第一个段落(概论)下面的图:

饼图对比游客四类旅游景点的数字和五个不同的主题公园在英国1999。
很显然,主题公园和博物馆/画廊是当年最流行的两种类型的旅游景点。到目前为止,在主题公园的游客比例最高的部门收到黑池游乐海滩。

The pie chart compares figures for visitors to four categories of tourist attraction and to five different theme parks in Britain in 1999.
It is clear that theme parks and museums / galleries were the two most popular types of tourist attraction in that year. Blackpool Pleasure Beach received by far the highest proportion of visitors in the theme park sector.

Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that 38% of the surveyed visitors went to a theme park, and 37% of them went to a museum or gallery. By contrast, historic houses and monuments were visited by only 16% of the sample, while wildlife parks and zoos were the least popular of the four types of tourist attraction, with only 9% of visitors.


In the theme park sector, almost half of the people surveyed (47%) had been to Blackpool Pleasure Beach. Alton Towers was the second most popular amusement park, with 17% of the sample, followed by Pleasureland in Southport, with 16%. Finally, Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland Windsor had each welcomed 10% of the surveyed visitors.


建议:例如,不要写:

· Theme parks were first.

· Theme parks came first, and museums were in second place.

· In last place were wildlife parks and zoos.


相反,你应该写:


· Theme parks were the most popular type of tourist attraction.

· Theme parks attracted the highest proportion of visitors, and museums were the second most visited attraction.

· Wildlife parks and zoos were the least popular of the four types of tourist attraction.

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