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雅思大作文高分技巧之审题
发布日期 ：2017.07.07 浏览次数：2024 次
审题是备考雅思大作文考试过程中非常重要的一步，考生们时常误解，他们一看到作文题目,就匆匆落笔,结果往往造成偏题,甚至出现“下笔千言,离题万里”的现象。中国学生一方面常常文不对题，另一方面只着眼于如何写出漂亮的句子和高级的词汇，而没有搞清写作的本质，华盟教育就从审题进行简单讲解，为考生提供雅思大作文高分技巧之审题，希望对考生有所帮助。
首先，我们从误区分析一下审题。
误区：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the only main cause for people’s unhealthy eating habits.
看到这个题目，同学们立刻会开始想，有没有other reasons for unhealthy habits，想出三条如：1. People’s tight schedules do not allow them to eat at regular hours; 2. Sometimes people are eager to lose weight or to keep fit so that they go on "endless diets"; 3. Bearing heavy burden both physically and mentally, some consider eating constantly as their most effective stress reliever. 综上所述，advertising is not the only cause.
这个写法看起来非常完备，但其实犯了一个不起眼却严重的错误--题目不是要我们证明it is not the only cause，而是要我们去证明it is not the only main cause。多一个"main"，意思是很不一样的。如果我们只需要证明it is not the only cause，那么找出other causes即可即例1中的写法。但是，如果我们要证明it is not the only main cause，就需要证明other causes that we mentioned are also main causes，这就需要在每一段中加上一些专门的说明。或者，更简单的办法是去证明advertising is not even a cause, 直接在每段的末尾加上advertising与该段所论述的unhealthy eating habit无关的论述即可。If it is not a cause, how can it be the onlymain cause? 这样一来，就不用通过证明还有其他main cause来反驳了，事实上，证明某种cause是main cause还是挺有难度的，因此笔者推荐同学们用后一种方式进行论述。因此，文章还是disagree，而三段的主题句分别应该是：1、1. People’s tight schedules do not allow them to eat at regular hours, and it is obvious that they are too busy to be influenced by advertising; 2. Sometimes people are eager to lose weight or to keep fit so that they go on "endless diets", and this is more like a result of human nature, the pursuit of beauty, but not advertising; 3. Bearing heavy burden both physically and mentally, some consider eating constantly as their most effective stress reliever, and it is quite clear that no advertising encourages them to do so
写作高分句型的素材：
在表达观点时，考生要善于运用一些较好的句式表达以便让文章语言表达的更加丰富，效果也会更明显。列举几个句子，可供参考。
Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that.... 最近，这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注，有人开始担心______。
Some people contend that ... has proved to bring many advantages (disadvantages). 有些人认为____有很多有利之处 (不利之处).
